<p>I am going to be honest with you. I am an awful writer. The colleges I am applying for (BC, BU, Villanova, etc.) are not going to be impressed. I am very worried that my essay is going to kill me. Could someone please read my essay for, and give me some suggestions I would really appreciate it. </p>
<p>It it the topic of your choice essay. I am also using it for Villanova's talk about something you learned in your life and how you could use it to help fellow students.</p>