Could someone please read my appeal?

I’m just about done. Is anyone interested in me privately messaging them? I think my writing skills may be lacking a bit, and want to present my case stronger. If possible, shorten the length of the appeal as well.

A little background info:

3.8 gpa
tag’d yes
major comp sci

reason for rejection: UCI only counted the units for one math course due to what they called a duplication. I spoke to my counselor and this should not be the case.

Any help appreciated.

I’ll take a look at it. I almost accidentally did course duplication but called them before I enrolled to ensure the courses wouldn’t overlap. Community college councilors don’t know anything FYI, they screw so many people every year. Which CC and which courses overlapped?