Could someone read my common app essay?

Colleges and Universities A-Z Harvard University
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<p>So I've finally gotten my Common Application essay into what I consider acceptable shape, but it would definitely benefit from some editing. If anyone is willing to read it, I'm heartily welcoming any feedback.</p>

<p>P.S. It's about my coming out experience, so if you have any objections to gay people it's probably not for you.</p>

<p>Thanks!</p>

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<p>i'm not sure if i'm the best judge, but i'm willing to give feedback.</p>

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<p>Sure, i'll have a look. I'm actually still in the closet (i'm bi) so i might be a good judge.</p>

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<p>can take a look...good luck</p>

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<p>I have no problem with gay people. I can take a look if you'd like.</p>

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<p>i'll look at it.</p>

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<p>I'll look at it.</p>

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<p>read it...</p>

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<p>me too! i'll read</p>

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<p>i'll read it</p>