Could someone read my essay please?

College Essays
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<p>I am transfering from a 4 yr state school to a more competitive top 50 school and would prefer not to name either institution.</p>

<p>I would very much appreciate it if someone would read and comment on my essay.</p>

<p>Thanks</p>

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<p>16 views, 0 replys
anyone?</p>

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<p>Sure(10char)</p>

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<p>I can take a look. it's ok if you don't mention your school</p>

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<p>oh when do you need the feedback back? and what do you want me to do for you?</p>

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<p>I'll help! =]</p>

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<p>pm me i may be able to help you out</p>

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<p>PM it to me</p>

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<p>PM it to me. I will read it !:)</p>

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<p>ill read it</p>