Couple of essays

<p>I've got two essays written for two different schools, one is a typical app essay, another is a dramatic essay (so it's more like a short story). Anyone wants to read them and give me some feedback? Not particularly concerned about whether you're applying this year because the essays are pretty specific to my situation and you probably couldn't plagiarize it if you wanted - still, it would be best if you were not 2013 or not international. I don't want to risk anything.</p>

<p>For the dramatic essay it would be nice if a theatre/writing/film major read it. A little worried about this one, because while the material is dramatic enough, I'm afraid my treatment may not be.</p>

<p>Takers?</p>

<p>I'll proofread them both if you'd like butI'm not theater or arts major.</p>