Creative supplemental essay--any takers?

<p>I don't want to give out any more details than what's in the title of this thread, but let me know if you'd be willing to read it. :)</p>

<p>I’d be happy to. What exactly are you looking for- grammar or content critique?</p>

<p>Thank you! Mainly just content but if there’s anything terribly wrong with the grammar, you can let me know.</p>

<p>I’d love to read it but I’m not sure how much help I’d be. PM it to me if you want :)</p>

<p>I’ll read it! :)</p>