Critique my Common App Essay

<p>I would really appreciate any criticism or editing on my essay. Please let me know if you would be willing to help me!</p>

<p>thanks</p>

<p>i’ll take a look-- email it to me as an attachment <a href="mailto:missmibster@yahoo.com">missmibster@yahoo.com</a></p>

<p>bump_____________________</p>

<p>I’d be happy to critique,
PM or E-mail: <a href=“mailto:NKunkel@ucsd.edu”>NKunkel@ucsd.edu</a></p>

<p>ill take a look, pm me</p>

<p>I’d love to give some feedback. :)</p>

<p>hey id love to help you pm me</p>