<p>For my personal statement essay, I want to write about how I lived in Japan during my elementary school years. Then I moved to the US, and although the US is known as a "melting pot," I felt my community did not embrace diversity as much as I thought was necessary. So I founded an Asian Appreciation Association at my school.</p>
<p>Is it too generic? Too cliche?</p>
<p>i like it alot, can i read it? pm me</p>
<p>bump…</p>
<p>hmm i remember reading this before…i’m surprised i didnt respond</p>
<p>your topic confuses me …i mean the main premise is totally cliche but it could be written well i guess…i’ll take a look if u’d like</p>
<p>This really depends on the content (i.e. strong anecdotal evidence of a clear grasp of perceived injustices and your determination to resolve them.) If you’d like, PM me.</p>
<p>as long as you keep it interesting, it should work</p>
<p>already got in ED, willing to read it if you like</p>