Critique my Harvard essay

<p>Only two days remain for the deadline, and I am nervous about my essay. </p>

<p>Anyone care to read it and offer advice and criticism?
I'd prefer readers who aren't applying this year.</p>

<p>Thanks very much!</p>

<p>will swap with you. PM me.</p>

<p>will swap essays</p>

<p>I’ll read it; I’m not applying this year.</p>

<p>Actually, in a sudden burst of inspiration, I just submitted what I had. :D</p>

<p>Thank you all, though!</p>

<p>I’ll critique it. I’m definitely not applying to Harvard so don’t worry. We can trade essays, just PMs yours over. (Trading as in trade to critique)</p>