critique my not so brilliant essay?

College Essays
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<p>i thought this was the best piece of work everrr when i first wrote it a few weeks ago. now looking back ... it seems pretty ordinary :/ I'd love some people to take a look at it and tell me what they honestly think!</p>

<p>some things: no 2010ers, PLEASE. please already be in college, where doesn't really matter, but I'd really prefer no high schoolers. and i'll proobably only send it if you have a decent number of posts.</p>

<p>thanks in advance!!!!</p>

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<p>If you need another opinion, you can count on mines. Although I have to tell you I do have a bias towards creativity (I’m a journalism major)</p>