<p>have any of you ever written an essay that ends up just blabbing about what you did? did you feel it was tooo... uncreative or bland or blunt? how did you fix that? or is that somewhat expected/acceptable?</p>
<p>thanksss</p>
<p>I worked on my one essay quite a bit. Rather than blabbing, try giving anecdotes. Be descriptive about how you felt as the events occurred. Also, try not to cover everything, I suggest focusing on a single event that is able to reveal a greater purpose.</p>