dear sir or madame will read my essay, it took my years to write, what do you say?

College Essays
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<p>Will anyone care to take a look at my first draft. Please tear it apart because I really want some constructive criticism.</p>

<p>Please no 08 or 09 people, not that I think you'd steal it or anything but I just don't think it's a good idea, you dig?</p>

<p>i'll pm it to you if you express interest. it's about the beatles btw.</p>

2

<p>I'll give it a go.</p>

3

<p>ill read it and give you feed back.</p>

4

<p>beatles? yes please! send</p>

5

<p>I'm 08, but I'll read it if you want.</p>

6

<p>I'll read it.</p>