Describe the point at which you became human.

College Essays
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<p>Such is the prompt around which my essay was written. I'd appreciate it greatly if any of you, especially those of you who have already undergone the college admissions process, would read over and critique my essay for me, and would be greatly obliged to anyone who did so.</p>

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<p>College freshman. Feel free to PM. =]</p>

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<p>I'll read it if you want a second opinion.</p>

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<p>hmm, how did I miss this?
I will definitely read something as interesting...since I have been human for a long time, long enough to have been admitted into college and therefore not be a threat to you in any way. :)</p>

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<p>wow! That sounds really interesting! I would love to read it!</p>

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<p>bump (10char)</p>

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<p>Sounds really unique, feel free to pm me.</p>

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<p>Any other takers?</p>

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<p>sure i'll read it</p>

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<p>Mm I am intrigued! I'll give you a really nice critique.</p>

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<p>ill read it</p>