Desperately Need CC'ers to Critique My Common App Essay!

College Essays
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<p>Hey Everyone!</p>

<p>I have another Common App essay done, and would really welcome any critique and advice. If you are willing to give it a read, please comment and I'll PM it to you!</p>

<p>Thanks in advance!</p>

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<p>bump!</p>

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<p>WELCOME STRANGER. I, CAPITALAMERICA, AM WILLING TO INSPECT YOUR FINELY CRAFTED LITERARY PIECE.</p>

<p>send me a pm :P</p>

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<p>Sure I’d love to. And lol at captain america</p>

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<p>Sent! Thanks guys!</p>

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<p>Anyone else? I will be glad to offer critique/advice in return!</p>

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<p>I’ll read it! Just PM me!</p>

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<p>Sure, I’m willing to just PM me it :)</p>

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<p>I’ll read it!</p>

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<p>I’ll read it.</p>

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<p>Anyone else?</p>

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<p>i will!</p>

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<p>I can read it!</p>

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<p>Anyone else? I basically finished my final draft, and would like someone to take another look!</p>

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<p>I’ll take a look at it:)</p>

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<p>I can read it :)</p>