Did I mess up on my essay..

<p>I had the topic about impolite, as many others.. I was going to write about WW2(Hitler), sports(NBA), and The Great Gatsby... In that order.. Well I only had 2 minutes after finishing the NBA paragraph, so I quickly wrote my conclusion, until after my essay, I had completely forgotten to write about my Great Gatsby paragraph.. Did I make a mistake of writing about the NBA instead of Great Gatsby?</p>

<p>probably.. great gatsby would've been a better choice.. how much length did you fill up</p>

<p>I finished almost 3/4 of the 2nd page when the proctor called time.</p>

<p>I ended mine with a meshed together 4th body paragraph conclusion monstrosity. :(</p>

<p>Hmm..a lot of ppl seemed to use the Great Gatsby...
I did Thomas Hobbes Leviathan, George Orwell's 1984, and Churchill and the whole Communism era thing</p>

<p>I did Antigone and also talked about the murder that happened last year in Winnipeg, Canada</p>

<p>That's at least better compared to mine (same prompt)
I bare have the intro done and like half of the first body</p>

<p>So many people seem to have used sports and Great Gatsby for this promt.
anyone else use Teddy Roosevelt and/or the Grapes of Wrath?</p>

<p>am i the only one who used rosa parks on the essay?</p>

<p>Omg I feel so stupid! I got the one about "does being ethical bring success" or something like that, and I couldn't think of any historical or literary examples so I made up a fake story about how my mom lied to my aunt saying that a dress was OK when it was in fact hideous... Then I put in a lot of stuff about how being ethical brings about a certain type of success - spiritual success - which many people regard even more highly than financial status, etc. </p>

<p>Then friends of mine that were in the same room told me that they wrote about J.P. Morgan and his business practices which would be sooo much better >_<... Did I screw it up? lol "/</p>

<p>haha u def to that example from the CB book. its the same exact example used in the essay that they give for a question in the explaining each section part of the book</p>

<p>haha yeah, it actually is... "/ i feel so unoriginal.... but srsly the sample essay from the cb book was about deception and this one about honesty... "/</p>

<p>@ezaga</p>

<p>I didn't specifically write about Rosa Parks, but I used the civil rights movement.</p>