<p>I'll make this short and simple so I won't lose you guys!</p>
<p>READ THE BOTTOM AFTER LOOKING AT MY SAT SCORE AND GPA. Then determine if it really shows who I am when you look at my experiences. I want to know if you thought something different.</p>
<p>SAT SCORE 1340
MATH 470 READING 420 WRITING 450</p>
<p>School GPA 3.3 Unweighted (Have not taken any ap classes before)
But I'm planning to take 2 AP classes in my Senior year.</p>
<p>Extracurricular activities or events:</p>
<p>-I work for my family business. I started working at age 12. I have worked for them for almost eight years, every single day, and right after school. Working has taken most of my time during days. No time to hang with friends, no time for sports nor clubs at school.</p>
<p>-I'm part of a karate club that I joined a year ago. Martial arts has always been my favorite thing to do and too bad they aren't offered at high schools. I'm able to do karate because it opens on Saturdays for one hour before the business opens, and because I can drive for myself.</p>
<p>-I'm proud of myself for being part of this business proposal competition in junior year. My group won third place, and we actually are planning to start the business in 2015 or sometime later. This was my first competition ever. I might plan to do another competition in my Senior year.</p>
<p>These are the only three things that became part of my life and since I have one more year to go, as a senior, I hope to add the list. </p>
<p>Top schools I want to apply to:</p>
<p>American University
George Washington University
Umass Amherst
Babson College
St. John Fisher College
Boston University</p>
<p>Safety schools:</p>
<p>Suffolk University
Nichols College</p>
<p>My plan is to receive Master degree in accounting, work as an forensic accountant and/or work for the FBI. I have always wanted to work for the government.</p>
<p>Please tell me if you thought differently of who I am. Also, will my common application and essay look really good? Do I stand out really well and get a shot at my top schools?</p>
<p>Thank you so much for your time and I can't wait to hear your feedback!</p>