<p>I’m a high school junior in Delaware. I recently moved here from a school in New York that produced a good number of Ivy/Top-notch students. People say that it’s essential for each student to have a hook, whether it’s academic, athletic, or uniqueness. I think my hook might be that I was adopted from China as an infant and I was brought up with a very open-minded attitude towards life. I am raised Jewish and went to Hebrew school (had a batmitzvah and all) but also went to Chinese school for a few years. I always had a hard time identifying myself, because the only thing Chinese about me is me; physically. I also think I have the ability to write a really solid, honest, and convincing essay when I apply. My teachers and parents have always thought that I had a very unique way of thinking into things, and that I really know how to express myself through writing.
AP classes that I have taken/ am already enrolled in/ plan on taking
AP Euro - 5 on the AP
AP U.S
AP Government
AP Bio
AP Physics B
AP English Language & Composition
AP English Literature
AP French</p>
<p>My uw gpa is currently about 3.8 but weighted its about a 4.3
-This is changing this year, I was a tad lazy Freshman and Sophomore year</p>
<p>I haven’t taken the SAT yet but I will probably get around a 2200 on it
I’m also taking the SAT II in world history, u.s history, biology, and literature</p>
<p>I’m not entirely sure about my class rating because I just transferred. However I think I am definitely within the top 10th percentile.</p>
<p>My extra currics/hobbies
Cello for 10 years, Cross Country, Track, Drawing, Painting, Ceramics, National Honor Society, Key Club, Community Service Club, Chess Club, Art Club, tutoring
This summer I am traveling internationally, helping children in orphanages (on a scholarship).
I really want to do something in the fields of humanitarianism, sociology, or religion, because I’m extremely interested helping people world wide (Yes, I am aware that I sound 100% naive/unrealistic). This may sound even more cliche, but I want to give back, because I feel like it’s unfair that I’m here, taking everything for granted, while people in other countries, who weren’t as fortunate as I am, are suffering. Because when it comes down to it, I really could still be back in China, impoverished, and who knows what else. However, I feel like Brown can help me figure out which path I would like to go in because of their open curriculum. </p>
<p>Hmmmm, what else? I don’t think any of the following factor into the equation but I’ll give it a go. My family is low income, without a doubt. I did the calculator for financial aid and Brown said they’d cover practically everything. The summer of 2012 I am going on Birthright to Israel. I did gymnastics competitively for 7 years, I stopped 4 years ago but I trained during the summer at the International Gymnastics Camp in PA. My team placed 1st in NY and 12th Internationally in the Knowledge Masters Open, I was in 5th grade, so i guess this is irrelevant. I went to a Jewish sleep away camp since I was 10. </p>
<p>So please can you give me advice, constructive criticism, anything at all?</p>