<p>I would really like some input on this. It's about death, but neither in a sulky nor Hallmark card sort of way. Tell me your thoughts; did you learn about me, or someone else? (If you read it, you'll see that I was the observer, not the doer)
I'm happy to PM this essay to anyone willing to read it. Any (honest but relevant) suggestions are greatly appreciated. Feel free to rip it if you think it needs to be ripped :) </p>
<p>Thanks so much, TJM</p>
<p>sure, send it to me</p>
<p>I need a break from revising my own essay, so I'd be happy to edit yours for you if you want.</p>
<p>I'll take a look.</p>
<p>Alright, I've changed quite a few things; anyone willing to look at it a (second) time?
I think it's much more "about me" this time.</p>
<p>Thanks</p>
<p>sure, pm me</p>
<p>Sure, i'd love to give feedback</p>
<p>Actually i'm really excited to have a read as well because im planning to write on a pretty gloomy topic as well. Would you mind sending it to me so i can have a look and of course give you some feedback.</p>