<p>I could really use some critiquing. (mainly content but grammar couldn't hurt) </p>
<p>Topic: A range of academic interests, personal perspectives, and life experiences adds much to the educational mix. Given your personal background, describe an experience that illustrates what you would bring to the diversity in a college community, or an encounter that demonstrated the importance of diversity to you.</p>
<p>Anyone interested? Thanks in advance.</p>
<p>Sure, pm it to me.</p>
<p>Sure thing, pm me</p>
<p>Sounds good, PM it to me please</p>
<p>pm’d all. anyone else?</p>
<p>pm me as well!</p>
<p>sent. pm what you think. thanks in advance</p>
<p>any one else? i would love to get some other peoples’ take on areas for improvment? fyi: i proofread back if you need a critique of your own</p>
<p>Sounds good. Just PM it to me and I’d love to critique it.</p>
<p>PM it. If it is in MS word format I can critique, point out errors inside the document, and send it back.</p>
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Me too. But you can’t add attachments to CC PMs so just email it :)</p>
<p>pm it to me I can give comments</p>
<p>I’ll read it.</p>
<p>sure, pm it</p>