Would you like to read/edit my common app draft?

College Essays
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<p>I chose this topic:
A range of academic interests, personal perspectives, and life experiences adds much to the educational mix. Given your personal background, describe an experience that illustrates what you would bring to the diversity in a college community, or an encounter that demonstrated the importance of diversity to you. </p>

<p>I'm hoping someone would be willing to read and edit this rough draft for me. I'd appreciate it very much!
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<p>yeah I’ll read it. I tend to specialize in overall logic and flow. If you are looking for someone to edit the grammar mainly and go line by line, I am probably not the right person. But if you want general essay comments, with possibly paragraph by paragraph breakdowns, PM it over.</p>

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<p>PM with title/prompt.</p>

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<p>Sure, PM me with prompt.</p>

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<p>sure, pm me!</p>

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<p>pm me the essay</p>

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<p>thanks-i’m pming</p>

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<p>I can read it and give you feedbacks.</p>

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<p>PM it over!!!</p>

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<p>you’re welcome to PM me and i’ll read it/give feedback.</p>

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<p>PM it over and I’ll give my feedback !!</p>

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<p>I’ll read it. PM it.</p>

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<p>i’ll read it; pm me</p>

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<p>pm .</p>

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<p>Sounds good. I remember last year when I did commonapp, everything seemed pretty tricky so hopefully, I can give you some helpful advice and such. 500 words is so little so it is best to use all well.</p>