<p>I'm applying for winter transfer to a couple of mid-west schools (Northwestern, UofM , Penn State) . I have a common essay that I'm thinking about using for all three colleges. Just wondering if some of you could critique it , give suggestions, and really help me with my spelling and grammar . Thanks to all that want to help !!</p>
<p>Sure. I'll critique it.</p>
<p>I'll help you if you'd like. I have to comment first that you should not apply to UofM. Michigan State is the way to go. Most definitely. (Most of my family went there, but I'm thinking more ivy league for myself, if you were wondering.) PM me if you still need help with it...</p>
<p>would love to see it, send a PM!</p>
<p>I'll give it a shot. :)</p>
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