Does this topic fit my prompt?

College Essays
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I think it does, but my mom doesn’t think so…help???
Prompt: at x college, we feel that a range of thoughtful perspectives is necessary for our liberal education community. Please tell us what unique perspectives you will bring to our university.

I wrote an essay about the two-year-old I babysit, and how her wonder at the world around her has taught me just how amazing the world can be, and how I should also look at the world with wonder instead of taking everything for granted.
I think that it fits the prompt, and I’m really not that unique (middle-class liberal white girl) so I thought this would be an okay essay. Thoughts? If anyone wants, I’ll PM the whole essay.

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It’s a solid answer to the prompt, but speaks more so about how you learn from the perspectives of others versus having experienced those experiences yourself. If you can’t think of anything better, go for it- It’s not a bad answer by any means.

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I think it sounds fine. PM me the exact prompt and the essay. Paste the body into the pm, Google docs links don’t work.