each week I wrote one paragraph and after 5 weeks...!!!

College Essays
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<p>hi everyone,
i haven't posted here for quite long.
my first draft sucked so I've made quite a number of changes to my essay..</p>

<p>can you guys read it and give me some comment?</p>

<p>btw, i'm still stuck on how to end the essay.. can you guys also suggest me some ways, pls?
thanks alot :)</p>

2

<p>PM me and I’ll read it.</p>

3

<p>Sure, PM me!</p>

4

<p>do you mind giving me your email addresses?
my essay is too long to be sent through PM
i’m so sorry for this inconvenience</p>

5

<p>PM with title/prompt. Just sent two PM’s if it doesn`t fit in one duh.</p>

6

<p>oh yea
just divide it into 2
im stupid
thx
anyone else?</p>

7

<p>Sure, Ill take a look, just PM me</p>

8

<p>PM me. I will read it and provide you with feedback.</p>

9

<p>thanks everyone
anyone else?</p>

10

<p>I’ll read it.</p>

11

<p>i’ll read it—pm me</p>

12

<p>anyone else?
i need ppl to comment on my idea and my structure…
cos i feel there’s an imbalance in my essay</p>

<p>dont know how many weeks this essay will cost me…:(</p>

13

<p>PM me with prompt</p>

14

<p>I can look over it. PM me.</p>