Edit my essay please!

<p>The essay topic is "Why I chose this school". Can someone please edit my essay and tell me if it's any good through the private message! thank you soo much!</p>

<p>pm away if ud like</p>

<p>You can pm me as well~~</p>

<p>this is my first time using this and i don't know how to private message anyone. can you tell me how and i'll send you my essay. thank you!</p>