Editing Essay Help

Hello,
I am a current undergrad student looking to transfer to from my community college to a private universatt. I have everything in my application (COMMON APP) ready, even recommendation letters, except for the personal statement. I have been having so much trouble with it(. Please provide a statement that addresses your reasons for transferring and what you hope to achieve). As you can see it is not very open ended! Anyone willing to take a look/edit it for me or give me any feedback? Your help would be greatly appreciated!