<p>i just finished writing my first draft of this essay
anyone willing to critique it?</p>
<p>prompt: fav. amusement park ride and how it shows my outlook on life</p>
<p>bump? please :D</p>
<p>I’ll critique it.</p>
<p>Is that really the prompt, or is it an essay of your choice, so that’s the prompt you gave it?</p>
<p>bump anyone else ? 
i just edited it more</p>
<p>sure send it to me (I am done with my app, so no worry, by the way you could give me
your opinion on my essay)</p>
<p>bump bump bump?</p>
<p>pm me…ill read it</p>
<p>I’m pretty sure Princeton had a similar prompt a few years ago
PM me!</p>