<p>I wrote this personal statement to apply for QuestBridge College Admissions Conference and I got in but I can't help but wonder if the essay helped. As I draw closer to applying to college I worry about everything and want to make my personal statements top-knotch. I would like some criticism and pointers on that essay and my writing style. I'll PM it to anyone interested. Thanks.</p>
<p>I’ll take a look, edit and give you my two cents.</p>
<p>I can read it. Make sure to tell me what the prompt is.</p>
<p>I would love to read it</p>
<p>PM it to me and I’ll do it!</p>