Essay done---any takers?

<p>Hey Guys!
Okay I'm applying for a summer program, very competitive. So I have one of my essays done........anyone want to read it and provide some feedback???? </p>

<p>I'll pm it upon request.</p>

<p>Thanks in advance!!</p>

<p>PLEASE!!!!!Anybody!!!??!!!</p>

<p>Congratulations! You've won my random act of kindness for today. PM me.</p>

<p>pm me, ill read</p>

<p>I'll read it too.</p>

<p>I'll read :)</p>

<p>I sent it to everybody except grnjd because it said your inbox was too full. If you want to I'll send it again when you clear it! </p>

<p>Thanks you guys!!!</p>

<p>pm me ill take a look</p>

<p>well if you don't have enough ingenious advice... </p>

<p>go ahead.</p>

<p>Sent! Thanks so much!!!</p>