<p>hey guys I need some help with my common app essay. could anyone critique it and point me towards the right direction??? thanks so much!
btw first post ever wooo</p>
<p>anyone at all?</p>
<p>i'll read it if you read mine, PM me:)</p>
<p>welcome to cc :)
pm me</p>
<p>Hey guys is anyone willing to read my college essay and help me out and point me or get me on the right path? If so thank you very much .</p>
<p>you can pm your essay to me.</p>
<p>yea yea yea send it i can take a look</p>
<p>Could someone just e-mail to see if this is working ??? Thank you 111</p>
<p>hey, wanna trade essays? ill critique yours if you wanna critique mine</p>
<p>Sure ill look at it </p>
<p>im in AP Lit and Language and Composition for a reason. As well as an english tutor. </p>
<p>Im kind of harsh though :)</p>