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<p>I have decided to write my essay on my passion for business; starting with getting kicked out of camp (after 8 years) for running a grilled cheese, soda,candy, and mr.noodle business and ending with starting my nonprofit Shop for a Cause (published twice this month in different news pappers). </p>

<p>My concern, i dont want to ruin my chances at a good school for coming off as a "bad ass" or as rich (for attending camp). Any feed back is much appreciated!</p>

<p>fyi
ACT:31</p>

<p>Colgate, Brown, Bowdoin, Cornel, Upen, NYU, Tufts</p>

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<p>Bump!
I wanna pick most likely Brown, cornel, Upen, or Dartmouth. where would i have the best chance and or should i not waste my ED of such difficult schools?</p>