Essay may be a little too risky- Can someone please look?

<p>I wrote my common app essay about getting yelled at by my priest. It mentions me being involved in church (religion) which may be controversial. Also, I tried very hard to make sure I don't come across as disrespectful or anti-religion. I need some more opinions- thanks</p>

<p>I will PM it to whoever would like it</p>

<p>I would be happy to read through yours if you help read through mine:)</p>

<p>PM me!</p>

<p>I think that is a very unique topic. I’d love to see what you make of such a event. Please PM me!</p>

<p>Obviously I haven’t read the essay, but just from reading what it’s about, I don’t think it’s too risky. If you just talk about being in church, then that’s fine, but if you cross the line to critiquing other religions, that’s where it starts to get risky.</p>

<p>@lamuniv thanks for the input. My worry is that by talking about such an event, it makes me look as if I show no respect towards priests anymore which is completely untrue. Would you mind if I Pm’d it to you?</p>

<p>Sure! I may not be able to get back to you until the weekend, but I will respond ASAP.</p>

<p>Bump! I need some feedback from someone</p>

<p>I’d read it.</p>