<p>I am applying to the Carnegie Mellon Summer Program for Diversity and after a long night of brainstorming/typing I think i put together a pretty strong essay on what makes me different, how I promote diversity, and what I can bring to the program.</p>
<p>My essay revolves primarily around my experience in the Boy Scouts of America. Would anybody like to take a look/give me some feedback?</p>
<p>I have no idea about the program but I'll give some feedback. =]</p>
<p>I could try.</p>
<p>me too .</p>
<p>sure :) pm me</p>
<p>I will give it a shot.</p>
<p>PM me if you want more feedback.</p>
<p>i give that good feedback ;)</p>
<p>me too, email me (click the email thing under my username)</p>
<p>Sure glad to take a look :)</p>
<p>So you're going to talk about a discriminatory group in your diversity essay? Bold choice.</p>