<p>Hey I want to know if I getting a good start. It's a cultural essay about a place that isn't so common so its not really easy to steal but still, I would really rather have people who are actually going to read it over and respond rather than someone who just wants an example. I would rather have someone with a little more experience if possible so don't get offended if I don't send it to you. Kind of nervous about this so I want some good, honest people. Be Brutal! Thanks! :D</p>
<p>I really hope you are kidding.</p>
<p>I hope so too. That's repulsive.</p>
<p>Ugh any takers?</p>
<p>Yay they deleted him! :)</p>
<p>Bump? I have 2 essays now. There's one about a tradition in my family's culture and comparing it to a Halloween parade and another is about my wannabe rocker-self in 8th grade. take your pick I guess. The thing I worry about is that I am a humorous person and that is how I write. So both of my essays have some humor. I'm afraid that I'll sound like I'm not serious but I wouldn't be myself if I wrote totally serious.</p>
<p>PM me.
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<p>You can PM me if you want.</p>
<p>Sure. PM me.</p>