Essay that needs a lil suggestion

<p>hi, i just finished my first essay and i think i have a good topic but i it needs some polishing. if you would like to read it and give comments/suggestions/ideas/corrections please pm me.
thanks =]</p>

<p>Sure, PM me!</p>

<p>PM with title/prompt.</p>

<p>surely, pm me!</p>

<p>I can read and give you feedbacks.</p>

<p>sure! i’ll help.</p>

<p>i’ll be happy to give you some feedback! pm me</p>

<p>PM ME Ill look</p>