For this Choate prompt “Please reflect on the influences and/or experiences that have most shaped your personal life, academic successes, and goals. How have these influences and/or experiences contributed to your growth as a person/student?,” I wrote about how this summer I worked with an esteemed doctor on helping children with a rare disease, and how I used to take my family for granted but now I appreciate them more, and how I want to become a doctor now to help other people. Is that too cliche? I watched some videos on tips for college essays on YouTube and a lot of people said this idea was too common. Should I change it?
I have another essay about applying to independent schools 3 years in a row. Is that a better topic?
Thanks!
I know it’s kind of late but all I’m doing this break is writing essays…