Example 12 essay from May 2013 SAT?

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<p>Now that our essays are online, would anyone who got an 11 or 12 please post their essay? I got an 8 and it's actually like really well-written, but I think my structure (cut short by time) and lack of concrete examples hurt my score. So, yeah?</p>

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<p>And I meant the one that was the dumb prompt about “wisdom” and “happiness”. Thanks. I’ll also post my essay if anyone cares to see it.</p>

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<p>This essay was **** IMO but it earned an 11. This essay wasn’t very good because I only got an hour or two of sleep (test anxiety) so I made some stupid mistakes and used the same word like 3 times. lmao. </p>

<p><a href=“http://i.imgur.com/NRUebng.jpg[/url]”>http://i.imgur.com/NRUebng.jpg&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/p&gt;

<p>(Also, all the places that are illegible did NOT look like that on my actual test. I guess the scanning machine tried to process information that had initially been erased)</p>