Experimental Essay

I was recently accepted into the WOW program at Williams and will be visiting in a week. From past years, about 90% of the people that were in this program and applied to the college were accepted, so I have a very good chance of getting in. This opened me up to an option that I had been thinking about before this. I have had trouble writing traditional essays and had an idea to write a more experimental essay for the common app and, now that I have just about finished my first draft, I’d like some feedback on if this is a good idea/essay.

So the idea is to write 5-6 moments of my life in short 100-150 word segments, starting at when I moved to the States from living overseas. They will be basically detailing how I came to accept life in the US and how I developed. The segments are written in book-like fashion and are in third-person to start off and end in first-person, getting more personal as they go.
I can PM this if a closer look would help, it’s difficult to get this right so some help would be appreciated. Is this a good idea? What are your thoughts? Thanks

I’d recommend you show it to an English teacher at your school who you trust.
If you do send it to someone on CC be sure it is an experienced adult poster.

This could be interesting. Give it a try, and do as suggested above.