<p>I'm having trouble not sounding dry and boring any ideas? I'd like some honest criticisms as well. Also I would like to know how much I should talk about the experiment itself, in this draft I focused more on what I got out of the experience.</p>
<p>I'm having trouble not sounding dry and boring any ideas? I'd like some honest criticisms as well. Also I would like to know how much I should talk about the experiment itself, in this draft I focused more on what I got out of the experience.</p>