Thanks for checking this out! Already got accepted to Notre Dame (pre-admitted to Mendoza). Now I scrapped out all of my safeties (and some matches) and left the rest to apply to. Please chance me for these schools:
Stanford (pls)
Brown
Columbia
Dartmouth
Cornell
Yale
Nyu
Northwestern
UChicago
UMich
UPenn (Wharton)
WashU
UCB/UCLA
Objective:
ACT (breakdown): 35 C (34 E, 35 M, 36 R, 35 S)
SAT II: 700 on both Bio E and Math 2 (bombed)
Unweighted GPA (out of 4.0): 3.8
Weighted GPA: 4.25
AP: AP Comp Sci, AP Bio, APES, APUSH
Rank (percentile if rank is unavailable): N/A
Senior Year Course Load: AP Calc AB, AP US Gov, AP Human Geo
Major Awards (USAMO, Intel etc.): Nothing…
Subjective:
Extracurriculars (place leadership in parenthesis): Co-founder of online social media business, competitive ballet, lead saxophonist in my church’s all-adult jazz band (really, REALLY emphasized these three throughout my entire application), President of Key Club, President of Stock Market Club, VP of DECA, High School Soccer for 2 years (won D1 league twice)
Job/Work Experience: interned as an operations analyst at an import/export company, interned at a web-designing company for graphic design/programming
Volunteer/Community service: Youth leader at church (organize/lead bible studies, mission trips, and pretty much the entire youth organization…), Soccer trainer at city’s soccer organization for elementary/middle school kids
Summer Activities: mentioned above
Essays (rating 1-10, details): Not to act boastful, but:
Common App: 9.5/10 (My regional admissions counselor from Notre Dame sent me a personal letter specifically noting how she loved my essay, which was about doing ballet as a male, and my online business. Also, I forgot to send in my music supplement to ND so there was no way of her noting the quality of my playing)
Recommendations (rating 1-10, details): Predicting (take these with a grain of salt because I never read them):
Teacher Rec #1: 8-9
Teacher Rec #2: 7-9
Counselor Rec: 7-10 (she really likes me, but knowing that the student to counselor ratio is 1:500…)
Additional Rec from CEO/music mentor (happens to be the same person quite frankly): 10/10 I read it, absolutely amazing. Talked about my entrepreneurship ambition, saxophone abilities, and some delightful characteristics that I don’t think my teachers would’ve included.
Other
Applied for Financial Aid?: Indeed I did.
Intended Major: Business/Econ
State (if domestic applicant): CA
Country (if international applicant): US
School Type: Highly Competitive Public
Ethnicity: Asian
Gender: M
Income Bracket: 40K~
Hooks (URM, first generation college, etc.): First Generation, music supplement for saxophone (I know that this isn’t an actual hook, but I believe that the quality of it will serve as one).
Honestly, I’m just betting on my essays and music supplement (sax) for these long-shot colleges. In order to purely provide a sense of my musical abilities (no intentions to boast), professors from Berklee College of Music, my local CC, and other conservatories, have mostly commented on my playing, quoting, “I am impressed that you a high school student… Also, if you’d like to get together and play some, I’ll have time in the first part of January. Just hit me up.”, “I think you have talent… You seem to have a natural affinity for playing the saxophone.”, etc.

