<p>hey guys, need proofreading/editing for the final draft. Please help me out.
Thanks so much!</p>
<p>I'd read it, and evaluate it.</p>
<p>i'll critique it for ya, PM it over.</p>
<p>Still waiting for replies from both of you guys. Please try to do this asap, I am submitting it TONIGHT.
Thanks again!</p>
<p>anymore opinions would be extremely useful.
Thanks!</p>