First draft of my college essay! Any tips?

<p>I'm not a writer, but I have to write a college essay for ap lit that is due in July, and I obviously have to submit a college essay soon. </p>

<p>So if you guys want to help me I'll PM you. Just ask. :)
Thanks!</p>

<p>I’ll read it!</p>

<p>I’ll read it - PM please :P</p>

<p>I vill read it if you’d like. pm</p>

<p>Thanks.</p>

<p>Anyone else?</p>

<p>Yes, me please!</p>

<p>ill help if youd like</p>

<p>Thanksss. :)</p>

<p>I’ll read it. Be warned.</p>

<p>i’ll read it.
i think it’s so great that your school forces you to write your essays so early on! my ap lit summer reading assignment is to “read three novels of your choice.” -_-</p>

<p>PM me please :)</p>

<p>PM me please!</p>

<p>@ vinnyli: Haha why do you say that? :P</p>

<p>PM me and I’ll read it!</p>

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<p>Sure, I’ll read it PM Mehh =]</p>

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<p>i’ll read it! PM it to me</p>

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