First draft of my college essay! Any tips?

<p>PM me. i’d love to.</p>

<p>I don’t think I’ll send my essay out anymore; there are people who have said they wanted to read it, so I send it to them and they haven’t replied back, so it’s making me suspicious. And this was a week ago…</p>

<p>I would love to take a look. Please PM me!</p>

<p>pm it over, i’ll give some feedback!</p>

<p>I promise i’ll write back. pm it to me. =]</p>

<p>i’ll read it! :)</p>

<p>lauravaz10 re post 22:</p>

<p>ah, the light dawns…</p>

<p>Not a good idea to post your essay…</p>

<p>ill read it for u</p>

<p>Yeah lol that’s why I’m not giving it out anymore xP :)</p>