<p>So I've just completely a first draft of my first essay I plan to use for the commonapp. Looking for readers to tell me if it's good enough of a start or if I should go in another direction. Any takers?</p>
<p>Sure just give me the topic of the essay so I know what I reading.</p>
<p>I do theatre, so I wrote about why I like auditioning with freshmen (because I can see the growth I’ve made, etc etc). Sending now…</p>
<p>Send it to me. I can help.</p>
<p>I’ll read it</p>
<p>I can read and critique if you’d like, PM it over! :)</p>
<p>I’d love to help you 
Send it over!</p>