Looking for a first read

College Essays
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<p>'Ello fellow essay writers.</p>

<p>I finished up my first draft today and was wondering if someone would give it a first read. The topic is a bit weird and it needs some editing, but I need an honest opinion about whether it even "works."</p>

<p>No high schoolers, please.</p>

<p>Thanks :)</p>

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<p>Salutations fellow colleague,</p>

<p>May I read it?</p>

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<p>I’d love to give it a look. Send it over!</p>

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<p>can you sen it to me,i want to read it.thanks</p>