Fish out of water- Common App Essay

Applying to College Common and Coalition Application
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<p>Does anyone want to help edit and critique my essay? This is my first attempt so please be critical!</p>

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<p>PM me and ill try my best!</p>

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<p>I wrote 4 essays so far for my common app, so I guess I could help. I’m not a total newbie but not a pro either though… PM it if you wish.</p>

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<p>May I read?</p>

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<p>I’d love to read and edit.</p>

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<p>Thank you guys so much! I’ll send it to you right now</p>

<p>Ugh, I apologize if I send you multiple msgs; my internet’s acting up.</p>

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<p>hey I can help ';D</p>

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<p>I can help! I am a sophomore at harvard</p>

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<p>I’d love to help! PM me and expect a response in 1-2days :)</p>