Decision: Deferred
Objective:
SAT I (breakdown): 1350 (new) Didn’t want to send, but they wanted all scores…
ACT (breakdown): 34 composite: 30 Math, 34 Reading, 35 English, 36 Science
SAT II: 780 US History, 730 Literature, 680 Biology E
Unweighted GPA (out of 4.0): 4.0
Weighted GPA: 4.3
Rank (percentile if rank is unavailable): 1
AP (place score in parenthesis): World History (4), Biology (4), US History (5)
IB (place score in parenthesis): n/a
Senior Year Course Load: AP US Gov, Economics, AP English Literature, Spanish 3, AP Calculus AB, AP Computer Science A, Senior Bible (school required)
Major Awards (USAMO, Intel etc.): AP Scholar, ACSI Distinguished Christian High School Student (in academics, service, and community)
Subjective:
Extracurriculars (place leadership in parentheses): Associated Student Body (Currently Executive President, 11th grade Executive Secretary, 10th grade Class Representative, 9th grade Class Secretary), Comedy Sportz/School Improv League (current captain/team manager), Theatre, Women’s Rights Club (Founding Member), Film Club (Advisory and Producer), Church Youth Group (leadership team)
Job/Work Experience: Assistant at a Cotillion for 3 years, Currently working as a receptionist at a dog grooming spa
Volunteer/Community service: Teacher at English language camp in rural China 2 summers in a row, Human trafficking prevention educator in rural Ethiopia last summer, Girl Scout, National Charity League, School affiliated community service, Church volunteer
Summer Activities: Mission and service trips through church mentioned above (China and Ethiopia) as well as family trips and reading an awful lot
Essays (rating 1-10, details):
Personal essay: 9. Talked about a book I forced 16 friends to read last year, demonstrating along the way my passions for many things and my enthusiasm in chasing what I love.
School of Foreign Service Essay: 9. Discussed Human Trafficking and my experiences in Ethiopia. Might not have addressed the question as perfectly as it could, but it did a great job of coloring my perspective of the world
Extracurricular Essay: 10. Funny, irreverent, discussed my comedic improv troupe.
Recommendations (rating 1-10, details):
Teacher Rec #1: 10. From my math teacher, he adores me and is a very persuasive writer, although I haven’t read it.
Teacher Rec #2: 10. From my APUSH teacher, and I really shined in that class. The type to write “best student I’ve ever had” in it, as well as go in depth on how I think and process history.
Counselor Rec: 8. Good, it’s probably very positive, but doesn’t address me in a very personal or descriptive manner due to us not being incredibly close.
Additional Rec: 9. My ASB director wrote it, and because I’ve worked closely with her for four years it has a great insight into my leadership and interaction with peers.
Interview: Awesome! We mainly talked about different items on my resume and how I hope to utilize what I’ve done and learned in the future. I really came off as being enthusiastic and bubbly, as well as well-read, and I generally interview well, so it wasn’t a major concern of mine.
Other
Applied for Financial Aid?: Yes
Intended Major: International Politics
State (if domestic applicant): CA
Country (if international applicant):
School Type: Private Religious
Ethnicity: White
Gender: Female
Income Bracket: $100+
Hooks (URM, first generation college, etc.): nope
Reflection
Strengths: Essays, leadership, personality shining through my application, experience volunteering in foreign countries, LORs, Interview, Consistent extracurriculars doing things I love
Weaknesses: no hook, only three years of language, my school only offers 7 AP classes and no IBs (I’m taking all 7 though), no previous attendees from my school, not a ton of consistent volunteering throughout the school year
Why you think you were accepted/waitlisted: Not entirely sure. Hoping to be accepted through the Regular Decision round. My SAT was quite poor, but only because I decided to focus my energy on the ACT. I’m not superbly diverse, and I don’t blame them for leaving me to decide later.
Where else were you accepted/waitlisted: Accepted at Tulane University. Only other place I’ve heard back from, but I’ll hear from UChicago (my other top school besides Georgetown) on Monday! Wish me luck!
General comments:
Super bummed I’m deferred, but still maintaining hope that I’ll be accepted late. I’ve done everything I could, and can’t be upset with myself for that!