<p>Hi, thanks to some very generous members on this website, I was able to heavily trim and improve my Harvard supplemental essay. I think that at this point it is as good as I can make it, but if anybody could give it a quick read before I submit my app for general feedback, that'd be great. The topic is quite unique btw. Thanks!</p>
<p>bumpppp somebody please!</p>
<p>I’ll read ! (disclaimer: I am a high-school senior right now; however I already submitted Stanford REA (: )</p>