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<p>Assignment: Is creativity needed more than ever in the world today? </p>

<p>Creativity is a prevalent problem in today's world. Creativity is what changes and improves the condition and status of the world we live in. Successful people have always been creative,hence creativity is vital for world growth. Mahatma Gandhi with his idea of a non-violent protest and Albert Einstein's many proven theories show us how important creativity is.</p>

<p>Mohandas Karamchand Gandhi, a learned Indian man, changed the world with an idea the world had never seen before. Gandhi's creativeness enabled him to inspire and lead people to revolt against one of the most powerful empires in the world. Gandhi believed nothing could be achieved with violence, so he preached non-violent methods of revolt. His followers, who consisted of almost all Indians, revolted in a manner in which the British could not act against. This drove out the British; India became free once again.</p>

<p>Albert Einstein, another great mind who revolutionized the world. This man escaped from Germany to America since he was a Jew; at this time Hitler was killing Jews in the Holocaust. Einstein became one of the greatest physicists ever to be born. He came up with the theory of relativity which later helped build the nuclear atomic bomb.</p>

<p>Creativity is scarce in the world today, and without it, the world grows at a much slower rate. Albert Einstein who used his creative mind came up with great discoveries. Gandhi was creative by using his methods to gain followers and eventually achieve his goal. Creativity is needed more than ever in the world today because it enhances others' quality of life and overall world growth.</p>

<p>Thank You for reading taking out time and reading this.</p>

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<p>I already got one response in my inbox. I'd like some more please. Thanks.</p>

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<p>got one more.. thanks.. more please.</p>

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<p>The lack of creativity is the problem and stems from the desire to be a part of the junta. Creativity requires being different from others and draws attention towards the individual....we build safety nets of anonymity and unless we are sure that our ideas will be accepted by the people we are fearful to expose that 'creative' part of ourself..this fear destroys the spirit of the individual. Dispense with fear and you become creative...Explain how each one of us is capable of creating and what stops him..Explore the psychological barriers that prevent a person from being different and chartering new territories..thereby being creative!!</p>

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<p>I would give it an 11.</p>

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<p>okay so i've had..
1) 11
1) 8
1) 9
1) 10</p>

<p>hmm.. shud i take it as an 8 and try to improve them next time.?</p>

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<p>I think it's better to always give yourself harsh scores in the range of 7 and 8. (At least that's how I always scored by mock tests)</p>

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<p>Thank you all.</p>