<p>Thanks guys!
I wrote it (pencil in hand literally) in exactly 25 mins. Sadly I didn't have time at the end to check my work, typing it up, I realised there were so many easy ways to improve a couple of my sentences...</p>
<p>Is real success achieved only by people who accomplish goals and solve problems on their own?</p>
<p>Real success can be achieved without accomplishing goals and solving problems independently. Most people are specialized in one area, and, therefore, need other people with different specialities to compensate. Such partnerships are what induce success. This is evident in Steve Jobs and Luis Suarez.
Steve Jobs rise to fame is credited not only to himself but also to his fellow co-founders, most notably Steve Wozniak. In the infancy of Apple, Steve Jobs was charged with promoting and selling the products, the area of his specialization. Although marketing was crucial to the eventual success of Apple, the man behind the technicalities of Apple computers arguably contributed the most important piece of specialization. Steve Wozniak was a computer expert, skilled in the actual production of the hardware and software in computers. The first computers sporting the Apple brand, Apple I, Apple II, Apple III, were handmade by Steve Wozniak. From then on, bar a few starts and stutters, Apple has emerged as a contender for the crown of computers. Although Steve Wozniak departed Apple, it was after the initial spark that ignited the monolith of Apple. Without Steve Wozniak, Steve Jobs would have been unable to jumpstart Apple into the computer industry, and probably would not have become the influential being he had evolved into.
Luis Suarez is the most controversial and one of the best footballers in the football world, helped to fame by his financial agent. His financial agent is not the best or the most famous in the field, but rather a relative with some expertise in the arts of managing a persons financials. Why a relative? Because the agent has followed and helped him from a young age, a time when no one would have offered their services. From early adulthood, Luis Suarez has been helped along by his financial agent, who negotiates contracts, offers advice and represents his view infront of the media. Luis Suarezs agents sagacity helped transfer Luis to Ajax, the best football team in Holland, and onto the world stage. It is this shrewd decision that has ultimately propelled him onto the world stage and the fame he now baths in. Had one move not materialized, Luis Suarez might be one of thousand professional football hopefuls, likely never to be heard of.
One can achieve success with the help of others, as shown by Steve Jobs and Luis Suarez. Despite that working solo more accurately reflects ability, by combining skills of many individuals, success is much closer to reach.</p>
