Assignment :Should people make more of an effort to keep some things private? Plan and write an essay in which you develop your point of view on this issue. Support your position with reasoning and examples taken from your reading, studies, experience, or observations.
The thesis “people should keep some things private” is categorically false.Although some romantic critics would say that everyone has a right to privacy ,these critics are too dogmatic in their provincial ideology that they fail to notice the reality.The fact that people should not keep some things private can be explained using the examples of the holocaust,to kill a mocking bird and the Hillary Clinton email controversy.
In the World War 2,the Germans killed many Jews and Polish people and made sure to keep that a secret.Hitler,with the support of his racist followers killed millions of people.Had the United states and the Allies known about this,they would have prevented it.
Another paradigm is Harper Lee’s To Kill a Mocking bird.Set in this early 1900s,this book describes a man named Boo Radley.Jem and Scott,two children who live opposite to his house, are told by the society that Boo is a reprobate and is vulgar.Boo’s brother Nathan locks him in his house for years.But at the end of the story,Boo saves Jem’s life from a man who tried to attack him and that in reality Boo is a kind-hearted person.Had he not been kept locked inside,he would have contributed towards the good of his society.
In 2015,Hillary Clinton came under a lot of heat after the American public realised that she was using personal email accounts during her tenure as secretary of state.Had she not hidden this fact,she would still be the loved person she always was and the Democrats wouldn’t have come under severe backlash.
In summation I would like to say that the thesis “people should keep some things private” is a fallacy and it is only by keeping certain things open to the public can society achieve happiness and tranquility.
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